A very strange idea you`ve thought of here I think it shows how we put on a `mask` when we go outside showing that we hide how boring I our lives really our behind closed doors. So I would give the story A 7/10.
For the art style, it presented it as a psychotic, lonely and emotional tale that added that eeriness to it so for the art style I would give it a 8/10.
Overall a great short thriller you have here.